This is easily the best so far. I like the font. Maybe the word church should be smaller in relation to the name above it. I like the concept, though it looks a little like a submarine after it has surfaced. I wonder if it can be a little more edgy without becoming too rough. I still want to stay with clean and neat, but not too safe or boring. I just ran across a new churches logo in Chicago I will upload for you to see. It is very rough looking and would work great for their location. Probably a bit too rough for us but I like the concept. Check it out for inspiration as you revise. Thanks for your submission!
- New Entry - Revision. Did away with the church altogether and put more emphasis on the light and the path that leads to it. Feedback welcomed. regards DG
I like what you did to #19. I would like to see more variance with the skyline.
I will see what our team has to say about #20. The light rays will probably be too much. I want it to be simple so we can reproduce it easily, even in black in white. Try it with them gone, but keep the circle of light in the distance.
Thank you greatly for your feedback, it's most welcome :)
- New entry - As per requests. The rays have been removed and just the halo left in place. The horizon has been slightly coloured to get a better effect.
- New Entry - As a thought I have combined elements of the two logo styles and placed a light halo on the skyline for effect. Feedback welcomed as always. Best Regards DG
I definitely like #26 the best. I think we're better off without introducing the extra color on the horizon. I'd like to see it without the blue and I'll keep asking our team to weigh in. Thanks!