Entry #33: this one is really cool. I'm wondering if you could reduce the skyline to the right and do the white etched buildings like entry #11 and make the leaf for pronounced or curved so it also looks like entry #11. Really like the recycle border!
Entry #35 looks really good! Could you incorporate a little more water? also palm tree looks a little out of place, could it be incorporated into the building area? In our city the buildings are quite so tall and don't have spires and if one of the buildings could have a small dome to match our city hall that might be good. Please get rid of "for a green city." Can you do another example with the border a little thicker and change the text color of "rethinking paradise" to green or blue. Where the existing palm trees are, could you do a drop/pool of water on that side...needs more blue there. We really like the overall color selections!!! Could you lighten the sky slightly?
Hi, im so sorry because i have a little problem here. my little daughter just went to hospital this morning. so i dont have much time to revise my entries. but now i have a little spare time and hopefully i can use it my best. thx.
Can you take the spires/antenna tops off of the buildings? Our City doesn't have any buildings that are that tall with the antennas on top. Look at our comments from 2:54 yesterday, we need more water on the left side like a drop shape or something and possibly just have the palm tree sillouhette as white next to the buildings somehow.
I hope your daughter is ok, thanks for your amazing work thus far.
Can you have the sky go back to how entry #35 is without that glass reflection look. I think reproducing it on various mediums will be easier without that reflection.
We are very close to deciding and appreciate all participants. We are trying to extend the contest to refine the top four entries in order for us to make a decision. All artists please see comments and try to apply to your design: * Really like the hand and leaf circling the logo and the way the 'City of West Palm Beach" fits around the logo with the blue line in #43. Need to add more fade in green circle. * # 63 & 64: City is to tall, take off spires and incorporate hand and leaf from #43. * 58 & 60: City too orange, incorporate hand and leaf into design.
Thanks for the revisions, you are right on point. We love the richness of your colors the best. Entry #83 - Could you please do something with the skyline, not sure if there are to many buildings or what it is. A couple people have said it is trying to look like a specific place not just a general skyline like entry #80. Maybe the first two buildings could be different heights?
Anyways we still love your designs and this will be very close! We are being so picky because this logo will be plastered on everything all over the City.
Entry #85 - How do you think that logo will reproduce on letterhead or similar where the logo will be smaller? I know that can be modified after contest has ended but just wondering.