Churchich Recreational DesignLogo Design Contest

hpoe you like it, I prefer not use the child becouse there is too many elements in the comp.

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some changes

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in this one I made some changes in the stroke of the logo.

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another changes in the logo , looks good to me now, don't you think?

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Hello, thanks again four your logo submission. I like #17, but I have a few suggestions to improve it - if you have the opportunity to provide a couple of options, I'd appreciate it.

1. The moon needs to be on the left side (the other side) of the palm tree.
2. The type underneath "churchich" is difficult to read - I would prefer that you use something bold, lowercase and without the letterspacing so far apart. "Churchich" should also be initial capitalized (the "C")
3. I would like to see an option without the circle around the tree. How might you modify the design to accommodate this idea?

Thanks again - Peter

another design

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Hi, thanks again fro revised logo submissions. I think #45 is a good idea - I thought that #47 didn't work as well with 2 slides. I ask that Can you revise and use the same typeface be used in the "Churchich" as well as the sub-text "Recreational Design" - They should both be sans-serif. Also, can you move the palm tree to the first "h" in Churchich - that way it still feels closer to the original logo and only one slide on the left of the "Churchich". Please have the "Recreational Design" align right below the "Churchich"

Thanks again

Just a comment on all typefaces - Churchich and "Recreational Design" need to be both sans-serif typefaces

Thanks for all the feedback, here are all the changes, let me know what do you think.

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here are all the changes that you wanted, thanks for all the feedback

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