Brovie's "Hole in the Wall" ItalianLogo Design Contest

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Hellk, what do you think about these design :)

Thanks for kind comment, That's good, hope you will get the best result on finalist phase :)

work on it :)

I like your mascot but he needs a little work :) I filed for an extension to the finalist phase to see if we can get somewhere with this.
- First off the I like the lettering as you have it on #53. We will need to fine-tune it later but that one is good. We dont like the location of Powered by.. Try it without the flag under Italian or with the flag stuck in the ground near the mascot's feet.
- The mascot is good but make a few changes. Change all the red on his face to black.
- See if you can find a more italian looking uniform.
-Positioning - make him a little smaller and move him up a little and behind the B and the I a little so the whole piece is tighter.

Here it is type with no Anchocies! Added :)

I try to make a mascot :)

Can we see this version without the sauce splash and add in... Powered by: No Anchovies!

This is the word with new color sceme

Sorry i can't make a same concept fish head with human cheff body with other designer except you write it on the contest description, so i can then make its concept following the direction :)

Regards,
Rag

The thing I like most about this logo is the 3 lines of text- the colors, the font and how well each of the 3 lines overlap is really great! No matter where we end up it seems that we are going to have a text logo, a mascot, and then a text logo with the mascot. Please isolate out just the text logo without the mascot and show that so we can see it on its own. Then it would be great to play with the colors a little and mix them up to see how Brovie looks in Green and Italian looks in Red for example. That would be great.

As for the mascot, it's still just not the right fit. Its great that our fish plays into you design now but its confusing and we should go in a different direction. If you can see the other designs, I like the way the fish head looks as the head on the mascot with the human body like either a chef or a server. I like the direction of those mascots, but I really like what you have done with the lettering.

Thank you!

What do you think about these design :)

Hello,what do you think about these design :)

Thank you for kind comment, i will edit it :)

1st rank, regards
Rag

I left notes on your other design and I see some of that here. Let me it without the mascot at all so I can get a feel of how it looks on its own and we can go from there. Thank you!

Those fonts are really fun, I like them! Try this version without the Red splash background and incorporate our fish logo better into it. That could work with this mascot and getting our fish into his hands. Or even better would be the mascot is made to look similar to our other mascots. Great start!

Hello, what do you think about these design :)