Well, we haven't hit the homerun yet with the BE. Everything except for #359 is too hard to read from afar and #359 is too basic.
Can we tweak a few other things and see what happens?
1) The lines coming from the sides of Brilliant are a bit out of the theme. Can they be twisty vines (possibly green-gold filimented) in the theme of the foliage surrounding the Drop? 2) The tips of the 'i's are still a bit off. Can we shrink them a tiny bit. I like the size of #361 still the best. 3) I'm told that "Brilliant" is a bit lost. Can it have a gradient of it's own (possibly top down?) or maybe try a white version?
The leaves coming from Brilliant's sides are great, but I would rather them be the same color/definition as the foliage surrounding the drop.
The BE is really cool. I like the way the E is both the entire symbol and also the right side of the symbol. I think the leaves coming from the ends of the E are a bit off though. Maybe we could try different leaves or a set of three in the middle and singles or doubles on top and bottom, or vice versa? Or maybe just a single leaf on each end? Also, the little something poking from the center of the B is not right.
I love the "i"s. Brilliant.
I think you're going to love the branding direction I'm deciding on. SF Victorian houses for the bottles.
Do you want the leaves on Brilliant to have same colors as surround foliage? Where do you want the curls instead of leaves all three places? Thank you Kent
Hope you like the changes, wish the pics you work on were higher res so I can see exactly what you want.
Bonny is doing okay except for some other aliments. Hope they get her metal allergy test results in time. If there is no reaction on the reading Wednesday and Friday then she'll be cleared, but if anything is suspect another review is on Monday the day of the surgery.
Thank you both for your concern We really appreciate you taking your time to pray for her Kent
Looking Brilliant brother! Can you send a higher res version to brandon@brilliantelixirs.com - the versions online here are hard to zoom in on to see detail.