Entry #2. I like this because it combines both a roll (web) of paper and ends up in a sheet of paper. I also like the green "&". My question, could this be be inverted if the hole box logo were not used. In other words, if you were printing this on a white sheet and you didn't use the blue box, could the logo letters and design be in blue?
regarding #53 - I really appreciate your hard work and I like this design a lot. My company is pretty determined to have the Bradner Smith name be in blue. The green background won't fly, nor will a blue background. Would it be possible to do this design just using a white background? I think the sheet part of the roll could be in green, along with the "&" and the "heavyweights..." in grey. Thanks again.
daniel, the difference between #62 and #64 is two things.... I noticed the dot of the "i" was shifted in #62 and I increased the size of Bradner Smith in #64, overall it looks more balanced, you may want to swap out #62 for #64 thanks!
a key decision maker thinks the "roll" looks like an adding maching roll. I do see his point. The rolls we sell do not ever have a "hollow" core. They are solid throughout with a "wooden or metal core". I guess the point is, you'd have a better chance if you can address this by making the roll solid, with maybe a small subtle, solid circle in the middle. Sorry if I'm not communicating this too well. I prefer #62 design because the slogan is on the bottom. Also, if you want to deepen the blue color, that would be preferable. Thanks!
#92 and #96. Both are looking very good, but could you make the Blue a lot darker and deeper. People here are pretty insistent on what they refer to "Bradner Blue". Thanks!
Regarding #105, could you make the "Heavyweights in Paper Since 1852" a bit larger? People are having trouble reading it.
Also could you tell me how this works: If we select your design, how much are you allowed to work with us on any finishing touches after you've won? Say for instance we wanted a font change or some other tweek - how much can happen after you've won? Thanks!
Regarding #113, could you possibly make the tagline a bit "thinner"? I think the font is more readable now, but it looks a bit "thick" - talking about the "Heavyweights..." Thanks!