i tried to focus on the name of the logo , i created a funny vector of a house , i played with the typography making it more dynamic. the colors are very atracctive for childrens boys and girls. i think it's a good logo to print in shirts and vehicles.
I do really like this one, especially the action of bouncy O. However, the more I look at logo's I think I have decided that I don't want to emphasize the house itself in the logo. We will be trying to appeal to people of all ages and we will have products besides bouncy houses. As such, maybe you can try some of these ideas:
1.) Colors that might compliment our current site www.bouncyhouse.com (not the logo, just the rest of the site.) 2.) Remove the house and maybe try some characters like the other logos have, jumping kids, teens and adults or something to indicate a party.