I like the first helmet better, can you think of another concept that ties I'm the borderless concept a little better without the circle or any slashes through the helmet.
The font is a little too bold for what we're going for. I'm thinking a little more of an elegant stencilized font. If that makes sense?
I like the emotion in 421 over 420. Can you make it a little more obvious it's a horse. Maybe show a little more of the bottom of the neckline. It's looking good though!
My business partner and I absolutely LOVE where this is headed. We like the horse element so much, in fact, that we're considering changing the name of our startup business to accommodate.
Can you please replace "Borderless" with: 1. "Dark Horse" 2. "Dark Horse Culture" (just like you did with "Borderless Offroad" in #432
Alright, everything is looking great. We want the "Culture" to be included, and definitely below like you have it, however, we're not sold on the font. I like that it's smaller, but can you try a few different font iterations for "culture"?
BTW we're definitely going with you for the contest. We're not going to rank the new Dark Horse name as number one until the contest is over. Just so the rest of the entrants don't go crazy with dark horse iterations.
The domain is darkhorseculture.com.. try putting a .com after the word culture... see how that looks. Right now I'm liking number 447 the best with the spaced letters.
Just hashing over the logo... I think we'll keep the name and font as it is in entry #452. However, I just realized that the eye of the horse is disconnect and will not laser out of steel... The eye will fall out. Can you runs line into the eye that keeps the centre connected with outside?
Also, for the rest of our marketing, what is the name of the base font(s) you're using for the dark horse culture name?
I will submit the final iteration for your consideration. With regards to fonts this is something designers usually disclose after a contest is finalised and payment released so as to protect their creative. More than happy to give you all this information then, and I can also give you some insight into my other abilities to help you with design.
I agree, it does look better... I just can't cut that out of steel. If I laser cut everything that is black out. The white in the centre of the eye will fall out. You brought the white forward with the eye socket. Try bringing it down instead.
Keep the initial design... just where the eye comes to a point.. carry a little white space forward and down. If that makes sense. I think I'd like to see al title more black around the eye than the last design.
ok #458 is done. This is now 50 iterations. I have no doubt that you could adjust these subtleties when water jetting or laser cutting and you may need to as a visual may not be accurate. Happy with #458
Yep... This is exactly what I was imagining with my last comment. Looks Great! Let me confirm everything with my business partner and we'll close the contest. Thanks for all your work! Very much appreciated. You've been great to work with.
One last thing. What is the base font(s) you're using to build the Dark Horse Culture name? I understand you've modified it, just wondering what you're starting with, so I can get a hold of it for marketing purposes.