Are the colors of the BOKU-Logo are already the original ones? You find the in the comments (comment from Feb. 23nd) within the contest.
Even if i like it as it is there are a few things that should be changed:
(1) The BOKU-Logo should be bigger as it ist the CI of the Univesity.One idea would be that you make FIRST and the Logo almost the same size. The CI of the university gives ma very strong restrictions. Hope you find a solution (2) The Slogan can hardly be read in the size of the original thumbnail. But this size will be a very common size for Letters and other papers!
Hope you still work on the contest twoday, as it will soon be over and there is a time-zone difference i guess.
I made it smaller than the word FIRST coz you said it before in the comment (Feb 15th) that the size of BOKU logo may vary, also it is not obligatory to use. but i'll fix it and post the logo soon as I finished. thank you for your comment..
#108 looks really good. the question is if the mirror-effekt can be seen if the logo is printed. my answer is "no", it get's lost.
so the question is, if you can make avariation without the mirror or use ev. the slogan as the wave below (but not as seen in #71) , better 2 lines and no background