This one was a real popular one. I can see it looking really good on a website or as an app. I am worried it doesn’t look corporate enough but it definitely conveys the message of going somewhere. I'm thinking maybe adding another colour in the middle strip will bump up it's corporate look. What about yellow to orange? Also the bottom line of type is too small and could you please give some other typeface options, Something more modern? Anyway please have a play, my ideas are only suggestions but it just needs something to get it over the line ;-) Many Thanks
Id be glad to. Only the top ranked designer can make changes during judging. The rules allow rotation of the top rank for multiple artists to make changes. Please rerank temporarily to allow me to submit changes. It is 4:30 pm Us east coast time. I can have the changes ready by 9pm here. Please drop me a note to notify of the rerank.
Only the # 1 designer at any given time during this level, can add changes. If you temporarily rank me at # 1, I can then upload the changes that you requested and then you can re-rank it back to how it is now if you need to.
Its a silly little quirk in the system, but its the only way, within the sites rules, to get changes made during this level.
..also #106 and #107 use a new shape in the design and a forward leaning font for the word "Beyond" helps to further give the impression of moving forward or beyond.
As I try to do in cases where a similar concept may exist...I just wanted to bring to your attention that I have done a logo a couple of years ago for a church In the USA that also uses the path to a horizon.
You both had similar missions in your goal. It is common to use this horizon idea in logo design. I just wanted to assure you that yours is indeed unique and was created for your company. Being that they are different industries and different global regions as well as the actual artistic differences they are completely safe for copyright and trademarks.
I just wanted to extend you the courtesy of that information.
Please feel free to let me know if I can help you further.