I really like where you are going with #24; it strikes me as an inconsistent in one respect though, in that the body looks masculine but the smile looks feminine (because of the thickness of the lips it looks like lipstick). I wonder if there's some other image to convey happiness or triumph or satisfaction or pride of accomplishment besides a smile?
By the way, I LOVE some of your other work, like the logo for Downtown Chalk... Please don't feel constrained in any way by anything I've said in my project brief.
Thanks for your feedback. I glad you like my concept on #24. I'll try to find another way to make them more consistent while find other image that convey accomplishment as well.
On #33, is it possible to square it up so that it is easier to read? Also, can we make the billboard itself a little larger? It is difficult to read the words "be the billboard" given the size.
I'm very fond of both 44 and 45... I want to run it past my team... is it my imagination, but is the billboard smaller in 45? Also, is there anything to make the hands slightly more pronounced? I'm concerned that we're going to lose them in thumbnail. Really great work!
#52 and #54 update work. The hand already rework more detail and pronounced. Answering your question about #45. It is right that #45 billboard smaller then in #44. In #54 I make it as large as in #45, thanks.
One variation that may be necessary is to have a blank billboard, so that we could insert another company's logo (for a keynote speech)... with this in mind, could you please do a version that has a blank billboard and the words "Be the Billboard" below?
I like the gray cityscape in the background. Let's keep that element.
We need to do the following:
1. We need the billboard itself to be blank. 2. The words "Be the Billboard" need to be on the bottom, or someplace other thank on the billboard (like 61). 3. Could we see it where the only pop of color is the billboard itself? Perhaps a Royal Blue or Navy Blue or Purple?
I think we are down to the end... Our internal voting is that we need to see #63 with a black billboard frame.
I do appreciate the pop of color, but we need the billboard's interior to be blank and white. We LOVE the grey cityscape. I believe 63 with a black billboard frame should get the job done.
Could you also try making the words "Be the Billboard" slightly larger, so there is no misunderstanding what they say regardless of logo size?