two disabled children giving each other a high five for their accomplishments and achievements. The inspiration here is movement/motion and it's also symbolized by the swish shape framing the two. your feedback will help guide my idea in a better direction...hope you like this. thank you.
We like the direction you are taking so far, but it isn't quite there yet.
- Font should be bolder and stand out more - we like the ones without the dotted Y better. - Loop the image into the the letter A? - If it is possible, perhaps incorporate a heart into your image somehow.
The logo should portray children - so more youthful, without being cartoony.
do you feel the children i designed need to be more child like?
....funny, i looped the A originally, then changed my mind...will make revisions...just so you know, another designer has predicted my logo would get attention with you....luckily for me, they were right.
you don't even know how important your feedback is, thank you.
made the word ALYN bolder and connected to the shape...also, i've added a more enhanced children look...this feels very active and positive...what do you think?
(This comment references Entry #65 #66 with facial detail #68 #67 no facial detail)
#79 #80 or #78 #81(wheel not touching)...the overall feel is here is well balanced; these can be done with or without facial features. #82 in black/white to show you this desgin is ideal for reproduction such as printing/faxing/letterhead...etc. I'll wait for your feedback at this point to continue with edits if needed. thank you.
Vidi - thanks so much for all these new designs! I think we are on the right track!
We like aspects of #91 and #95 the best so far. If possible, maybe try the ALYN in blue with the tag line in red - so the heart and tag line stand out. Perhaps an option where the heart is closed but not colored in, as in option #68. We would also like the figure standing up to be a girl in a dress - so that we can represent both a boy and a girl. We do not need the facial features, we like these figures the way they are.
In option #91, we liked where the circle was not filled in blue. Also, we like the dark blue color - the figures and ALYN can be the same color, no need to add the lighter blue to the clothing (as in #68).
We love how you connected the "A" to the logo though. Nicely done. And the way you incorporated the heart and the disabled kids is definitely the look and feel we are after. So great job!
revisions are in: #97 in response to your #95 edit: ALYN in blue, tag line in red. ( i changed the contrast of the wheel, i admit). #96 is like #91 with heart outline and girl addition. I like both #96 #97...which one do you like best? tricky decision i think.
perhaps after seeying the black and white version, the decision is easier to make between the two...#98 #99 #99 feels easier on the eyes and would probably be best for paper reproduction/fax etc.
I can also make any revisions needed during judging mode.
Vidi - we LOVE #103! It is almost where we need it to be! Thanks so much for keeping at it! We love the blue background and the white writing with the heart outlined in white - it looks very clean and is easy on the eyes. It will also work well in black and white!
Few suggestions: Can you make the girl's ponytail a little longer - so that at first glance it doesnt look like an old-fashioned nurse? Also, can you make the "Transforming Disabilities into Abilities" tag line just a little crisper so it is a little easier to read? Not sure if it is the font, but something makes it a little difficult to read. Lastly, can we send you the Hebrew for ALYN and the tagline and can you do the same thing only in Hebrew - with the kids on the right side then?
Look forward to working with you! Please let me know if you have any questions.