Hi kaadrrh, thank you for your first submissions to my tournament! :-)
Can I ask you to try something a little bit more Web 2.0 Style? The bold "a" and "j" seem to me a little less modern than other font typing.
Some more things: I don't want to use the a. Can I ask you to use a combination of blue and green (instead of red) please. And pay attention, my name is spelled "jaser".
Sorry for all the feedback, but it's better to be more exact I think so that you can be right on track :-)
Hi kaadrrh, I like your new submissions (Entry #35 and #37) much more :-)
I see two problems though: 1) if people don't know the text, they might read "jallaboutjaser" (I mean they would include the "J" in the beginning into the word) 2) whereas it's true that I had asked you to use less bold, I have the feeling that the font of the text "allaboutjaser" is now so "thin" that it might not be readable very easily (especially not if the logo is on a white businesscard, without the orange background)
by the way: I like Entry #37 more, because of the changed coloring.
Hi kaadrrh, the "boldness" of entry #44 and #45 where much better! I dislike the positioning of the big "J" though. Please continue playing around with some other ideas how to design and where to put the big "J" (maybe even in light coloring behind the text? just brainstorming...) Thanks, Jaser