You were right about "Act Now" not vertically centered. Tagline was centered but there is a problem as beginning and ending letters "A" and "Y" in "Albany" have shape that creates illusion of tagline being not centered. #236#237 - two sizes for tagline.
Here are our next edits:
-Center the tagline under Albany and have it stretch all the way underneath it
-Center the 'Act Now" line on the orange bar, looks like it might be too close to the bottom half.
I think all of those are a little too bright. Can you try doing one where the text and banner are the navy and light blue from the brief? #0378A0 or #106290 and #09366D
Thank you! Is there a way to have the bikers stand out while retaining the size of the 'Act Now" text from the previous version? Also we can remove the tulip for now. Thanks!
Hello! Can we please see a version of this one without the tulips on either side of Albany? Could the words be bigger, too? Finally, would be great to see a version where "Act Now Albany" is one color, and the tagline is another color. Thanks!
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-Center the tagline under Albany and have it stretch all the way underneath it
-Center the 'Act Now" line on the orange bar, looks like it might be too close to the bottom half.
-Removing the bridge
-Removing the birds
and then can we try 2-3 alternate color palettes? Maybe one that is more blues and greens and then one that is more traditional/"real life" colors?