Hi H2,
Thank you for your entries! We like the clean aspect of the designs, and have a few suggestions:
1.
#27 we like the direction of flow this offers - moving forward to the right - via the line below.
2.
#28, 26, we like th bigger line better that in 27, but it's going the wrong direction (we want to show movement to teh right) Please see if there is a way to flip the graphic and have it start in the T or E area without looking out of place?
3. Brighten up the blue - we're finding that our pantone suggestion does not "Pop" very well on screen and need / want something brigher without going neon.
4. We like the shading you have used in some of your other competitions, like "Playgrid". that may add an extra element of speed to the look?
Thank you so much for your submissions!