Adventures by the BookLogo Design Contest

first attempt, inspiration is book and arrow in negative space

thank you

Thanks for your first attempt and the idea is not bad. I'd like to see something more colorful

Entry #13 thank you for your submission. I like this colorful version better, so thanks for resending.

Entry #13, I really like your design and just trying to finesse a little. I don't like my company name in multi colors, as I really want it to stand out. Perhaps the words could be in black and in an elegant script font, with the emphasis bolded on the words Adventures. Could you make those changes?

next design,
this is my revision entry #13. please ask if you want any others changes.
thank you

#57 Thanks for the new font. I really like your design, but something about the colors doesn't work for me. Could you try changing the colors of the balloon to the same colors in #49. Also, can you make the word "Adventures" stand out more in a darker or bolder font, and then change "by the Book" to a non-script font that stands out more - the script is too light to see and I want the word Adventures to be the focus word. Thank you.

Thank you for all your submissions. While I liked the designs a lot, I think the colors just quite didn't work for me. However, you are very talented, and I wish you much like in your other tournament entries!