Hello! Thank you. Hoping to make a few changes.
Could you give us different color shades? Still blues and greens, but different shades. These look a little cartoonish.
We are also hoping you can give us some other variations of the roots. It's okay if they extend out of view in the circle.
Could we also try a version with the green arrows between the words Commit > Act > Thrive instead of periods?
Apologies for the confusion. We do not want buildings at this time - but we like the simplicity of this logo. Just a few more variations would be great.
Thank you for this. Hoping you can show us a version where the image is a circle instead, and another where there is a simple hourglass (more curvy) with no landscape inside yet.
We are also considering more natural landscape instead of buildings, focusing instead on trees (oaks, maples, apple), water (we have a pond), and low rock walls
Thank you. We would also like to see a version where the inner design is simply landscape. In Harvard, our landscape has rolling hills, trees (deciduous, maple, apple, oak), and a lake. We also have some stone walls. We have overall decided not to include a building at this time.
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They can look like Town Hall (see reference pictures) and maybe some houses. There are no skyscrapers or big buildings in Town, so only small buildings please.
Thank you! We like this but the curve looks a lot like the Nike swoosh.
Here are some ideas:
Can you flip it on the horizontally axis and adjust the angle so it doesn’t cut through the word "commit"?
Can we see the "Commit Act Thrive" in blue?
And, in the curve, could we see small silhouettes of buildings either in the same green, blue, or gray?
Can you add the characteristic chimneys and rectangular addition on top of the building so it looks like the Harvard Town Hall? I'll add a reference pic in the images.
Hi there - really like this concept. Could we please blend the blue sky with the gradient at the top so they are more cohesive rather than two separate objects. Either making it all a gradient or all blue and please get rid of the light white line horizontal dividing the "sky" on the bottom of the hourglass. Maybe increasing the opacity of the main tree so it is more clear and also making the smaller trees in the background white to push the imagery further. This was a really innovative way of looking at our theme so thank you!
that stone wall looks odd here, can you please try instead to show a horse and/or an alpaca and maybe some apple trees in the background among the rolling hills?
This is great, thanks! Though, this is not the sort of tree you would find in Harvard. Could you try a tree without vines, mimicking either an apple tree or a maple tree? Also wondering if you can add a stone wall element here, and/or shift the design up a bit and add some roots under the ground.
this is very interesting. what are the things hanging from the trees? Also could we see the background as rolling hills? see some of the images that have been added.
Thanks!
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Could you give us different color shades? Still blues and greens, but different shades. These look a little cartoonish.
We are also hoping you can give us some other variations of the roots. It's okay if they extend out of view in the circle.
Could we also try a version with the green arrows between the words Commit > Act > Thrive instead of periods?
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In another message you said to avoid buildings so I havent worked on this revision yet.
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They can look like Town Hall (see reference pictures) and maybe some houses. There are no skyscrapers or big buildings in Town, so only small buildings please.
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Here are some ideas:
Can you flip it on the horizontally axis and adjust the angle so it doesn’t cut through the word "commit"?
Can we see the "Commit Act Thrive" in blue?
And, in the curve, could we see small silhouettes of buildings either in the same green, blue, or gray?
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i will submit the revision tomorrow morning.
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"Commit Act Thrive" -- change the font to something more dynamic, indicating movement
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I have submitted the revision.
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Aerial Roots.
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Thanks!