Hi Kent,
2 small adjustments to the stars:
clean up the nose a little, I think it's a little too pointy and maybe just needs to come to the left a little? more of a rectangle.
the row of stars on the underbelly I'd like to match the spacing of orions belt if we can, maybe in reverse order as if we're seeing orions belt from the other direction, but that's up to you. As long as the spacing is correct.
Finally the text, I think it needs to come to the right 4 or 5 notches and down slightly. I also put a little accent on the "Y", not perfect, but maybe you can try something similar with it. Don't think I got the color right either.
Have a look:
http://dynamicfilm.com/dog2.jpgWe're pretty much there. I love what you've done with this logo. Hope you're proud of it.
BC