Oh fantastic! what was it that caught your eye in this design?? I like the circle part.. I have some other colour options to show. - In Red...Blue, the circle by itself, the keys in a circle above the rectangle shape. Do you like fancy graphics - do you think fancy will work for a real estate type of company?? Sure, I can post up some different samples for you to have a look at.. Then I can see clearer what you think might really work for the image.
I like the freshness of simplicity. Your correspondence and input is highly appreciated.
Thank you so much!! I like circle tags better than rectangular ones, and i still like the green one a lot! Maybe because there is a repetition of a brand.. Do you consider green logo simple or fancy? I am open to all ideas, and I do think simple may be a way to go, the name of the company sort of calls for it. can we try the same green logo with different colors and different style of print 123Rent!?
yes sure here is another sample in the circle.. I've minimised the colours to allow the eye to draw in with the keys and then to the text, this makes it easier to read (or faster to read).
And.. some other versions with the text on the one line and different colours.
#28 and #29 are my favorite. I like the green color in the background. On #29 can you make the letters all white, make it a little bigger and straight like #2? Also can we try this version with a blue background like #9? white letters, blue background, keys. or maybe just put 123RENT!into one line into #9? and #28, bigger circle, same green background, white letters? and same version with a blue backround, white letters, 123Rent! all in one. Thank you so much!! I really like your designs!!
One more thing. We cant use the image of a roof top, window or house in a logo. We are offering apartments and not houses, and one of my competitors uses the image of a window and ivy. Thank you!
Ok.. super! I've got some new versions of those, and a version of it in the blue colour, and instead of the roof, I have used some other related and simple second glance imagery. Some shiny ones which I can supply in the same file if you like them too.
Thank you! I have a couple of comments. 1) I would like a hey chain tag to be bigger compared to keys, so the small font is easy to read as well. 2) can we erase the steps and just make a rectangular tag? 3) Can you make the lines exactly this way Straight From The Landlord. Forget Broker Fees.
here are a few more samples, the big key I used the circle and merged it into the key shape. (#79) I think 1 or 2 features can work, but I think three is too many features ( the keys, the keyhole, and the text) see what you like.. maybe choose something at a distance , then work on colours..
Thank you for playing around with it and submitting so many different versions! I think in terms of colors lets stick to blue, otherwise its too confusing. #50, 51, 55 are the best shades of blue. I am not 100% sure if the slogan really works. So can we try a couple of more things? I will be very specific:
1. Can you do #83 in blue background, white letters? same exact design, and dont put dot . after the word"landlord" 2. Also the version of #87 in blue 3.#88 can you make it in deeper shade of blue and slogan wording " Straight From The Landlord. Forget Broker Fees." 4. #89 with just wording "Straight From The Landlord" under the word "RENT" " No words "forget broker fees" and slightly darker blue background. 5. I still like the circle # 55 and #53. the only problem-it reminds me of a globe, which is irrelevant to the company. Can we maybe make letters a little bigger or the tag, and keys smaller, so it looks more like a keychain?
Please don`t withdraw any of your entries, I would like to see all the versions before choosing one. Thank you so much for all your work!!!
Dear Whitehorse, Thank you for your submissions. I had very specific comments last time about certain changes , color, shape, text etc. I am not sure why you submitted the wrong color and the wrong slogan.
Yes I am working on getting some other samples done. I will have a spare 5 hours before closing of the contest to do those. The one I posted most recently was in response to the last comment which was to imagine something related to ny real estate, that only took 1 hour to put that together.
There are quite a few revisions there and I will need to go through each one carefully.
My design process is a lot more loose and unconstructed than following instructions so I have to put my comprehension hat on and get those done..
I appreciate your patience and will have the changes up by the weekend.
sorry for delay, I have mild autism condition and don't often get requests to make lots of changes to artwork.. So I was quite overwhelmed.. It didn't take too long to do those changes though an hour maybe.. This design is the circle one - let me know if it's a keeper and if it wins I can make as many changes to it as you like!!
Posted more designs.. still in line with my intial ideas with the key ring..and still ledgible and to the point with the visuals.. I have just gotten better from ill health and will be out and about the next few days... there is still a week in judging mode where more changes can be made and uploaded.. thank you for working so in depth on this with me. I appreciate that.
oh I hope you feel better! Yes, I extended the contest, I wanted to find something that I am 100% happy with. Can we try one more thing? can you do another version of #50? Can you put the slogan under the key chain itself on a white backgroundin blue letters? Straight From The Landord. Forget Broker Fees.
couple more designs to look at, firstly with the slogan under the keys in Blue..
Secondly, I've put a few apartment buildings above the text and some sky and water representing the environment surrounding manhatten. it's loud but it's still simple, striking and unique unto itself. unless you think otherwise..
#172 really looks the best of all. i was also thinking about using .com in the logo since the website is the actual business, this will also be helpful when advertising since people will see the logo and know where to go. Can i get a version of #172 with . com? Thank you!