I really like what you did but it's important to me to stay true to the dots. I need them to educate my customers about how we do the pricing in the store. I like the swirl in #10 but it would not work for the sign I have to make because of the separation that is necessary. I added a note to my original ideas that should help everyone get a better understanding of the requirements I have.
Hi, I've had to make some changes in my requirements. First, It became apparent to me that my desire to make a logo that could split between two signs was too difficult and risked confusing customers and also was probably limiting the designers' creative options.So I've decided to just ask for the best logo possible for one side. What I'll probably end up doing is putting it on the large sign on the left and then repeating the dot part of the logo on the right side. This will give you the freedom to play the layout of the dots and wording instead of restricting you to a long, narrow logo. Also, I realized that the sign will be lit from behind, so it doesn't make sense to have lettering in black. I'm sorry, I should have realized that earlier. Last, I have spoken to my landlord. He requires "channel lettering" and insists that each dot and each letter must be separate and not touching. I've changed my instructions on the main page if you are interested in looking.