Love the theme of 'connection' with what looks like people in the center of the star. I'm wondering what it would look like if a thin, vertically oriented line was drawn in between each outer "person" and the middle person so it better emphasized the sense of "connection." Perhaps it would be too messy. Can a slightly more elegant phone be used for the text?
Thank you for the new versions. The one we've ranked as #1 is very nearly there. Can you please clean up the font spacing and placement a bit, specifically with the I that is off, and maybe use a serif font for consistency with the larger Zekenim lettering? As an example of what we are looking for regarding lettering for the tagline, please refer to ndru's submissions. Thanks again, Sebastian. Looking forward to seeing the results!