I really like the design with the sun coming out of the arched horizon. Any way to incorporate some of the suggestions in the first comment into this version?
We are almost there!!! On #1 above (this is the only version we are considering at this point) it is possible to make the RISING stand out a bit more - maybe different font, bold - something to make it a focal point?
We really like #1 above EXACTLY as is (like the arched horizon, YPO-WPO being on the third line, region being yellow, etc) I would just like "region" somehow made to look more prominent - perhaps bolded, different font, etc. Any chance you could take another pass. We are almost there!
I am so sorry for the miscommunication but we do not want any revisions to the logos with the full sun and the words through the middle. We would like revisions to #1 above - half sun with the arched horizon below, wording below the arched horizon, etc. Please leave everything as is in #1 (do not change order of lines or positions of any images) we just want the RISING to be offset in some manner (bold, different font, different color, etc).