We need to include this information: YPO Southern 7 Fall 2014 Meeting - New York
We thought it might be interesting to incorporate the New York skyline, perhaps in silhouette, to reinforce that the meeting will be held in New York City / SoHo
Can you make the apple look more realistic? My feedback from my peers is that they weren't sure they were looking at an apple. If necessary, a stem could be added and realistic color could be added to the inside of the apple to make it more easily recognizable as an apple.
We also need to add the information: Fall 2014 - New York
The New York skyline motif has also been well received by my peers. Would it make sense to have a silhouette of the NYC skyline as the background, framing out the apple and the text? It could form the border of the entire emblem, giving it a square profile.
#14 This is looking very interesting. What about cleaning up the skyline silhouette some - the multiple layers almost make me think of maybe Istanbul as much as New York, so we would like to see what it looks like with one layer of skyline silhouette. Could we also see the apple a bit shorter, which would make the entire logo more square?
We would like to put the most emphasis on the meeting theme: "Explore the Core". Could you change to have the "Explore the Core" theme as the most prominent text in the design?
The second most important information will be: "New York - Fall 2014"
The third most important information will be: "YPO Southern 7"
Hi, thank you for your feedback. I've sent some variations... with different placement of the text too... I will work on it more and send you new versions... Do you like new apple ( in #39, #41#42#43 ) better than the old one ( #40 ) ? Thank you!
I do like the new apple better. I like the text in #41 the best so far, but would like to see the Explore the Core even more prominently (maybe heavier line weight?) and the YPO S7 at the bottom in white on black.
Hi, if there is anything you would like me to change or add, don't hesitate to let me know...I'm here for you. Until the end, we can make this to be perfect. Thanks!