can you try a pink that is not so bright. maybe a blush pink, or a very soft pink. If the blue from #5 is different than the blue in #6, we like the blue from #5.
maybe even play with a slightly softer blue.
also increase the size of the "self-serve frozen yogurt"
a couple of things: 1. we dont like the smile. if we can get versions without that, that would help 2. not sure if we like the pink outline, so we've moved #5 to the top 3. we like self serve frozen yogurt in one color, on one line. just bigger
still looking for a potential design that has a spoon or other elements incorporated with it.
Would be interested seeing this with a more MODERN look to it.
#17. We dont like the stuff on top of the spoon. this new font has a bit of an asian look to it. can we go more modern? Lets keep the self serve frozen yogurt in blue, or try it in a grey to match a grey spoon.
#18. Lets work on the spoon. a slightly darker grey. No yogurt on top. Font is better, but maybe something a little less round. the "g" looks funny. And the "u" now lacks some character.
#27 headed in the right direction! Top hump makes him look a bit like a hunchback. can you bring that hump down? Dont need the grey shading on the lower half. Can you make the Y more pronounced and maybe displace the other letters a little bit? And then lets see if we can make his face not be dark, try it in white.
#27 can you also make the outline of his body touch the top left center of the "U" and then have the left side of him touch the other "u" or "r" in yogurt....
#29 I feel like the YOG are closer together than the URT. can you play with the spacing? like the unevenness of the letters in yogurt on #28. Can you make the "y" a little more pronounced. Same with the U. Then make self serve frozen yogurt in centered in between the Y and U.
I like his body shape, but can we tweek the head a bit? We'd like an angle like he's looking right at us.
#38 is getting cuter! I'm thinking i like his ears. I dont like how his head is the whole left side of his body now though. Maybe make it a little smaller like he's looking right at us. maybe play up the ears a little bit. and maybe a slightly more rounded body.
now #47 looks a bit too much like a cloud. Can we add a tongue or something to his face? can he disappear into the top center of the left side of the U?