Entry #24 play with the spacing of the lettering as its a little too compact. looking to go bigger and bolder with being able to make out the font. also i like how you did the E and layered it . Give me some different variations with merging of the lettering as well. your logo may have potential thus far.
Entry #144 Liked how you tried using some thick strokes around the lettering. it seems as though the lettering its self is a little cramped and squeezed together give it some room. also look at some of the other designs i had ranked and see if any designs inspire you to make a hybrid version of your design concepts.