Welcome icarrhou! Thanks for joining us. I love the seahorse concept and its symbolism. It appears to my eye, that #24 & #23 Sea Horse is identical...? I really like it. I don't love the font...I find it competes a bit too much...something more modern and flowy font-wise...I don't love the line maybe if the line felt like a line of sand that picks up the irregular line look inside of the sea horse (not a solid thick 'block' line) While I know it's tricky working with a tall, vertical element, would prefer if you could try to make wychmere beach club feel more united, then I don't mind the sea horse floating. Hope that helps....
If you want to show one with the wash out blues or saltier greys ....(#23 Wychmere font color is too light i think)
Hey there - thank you for your thoughtful feedback. I will take all this into consideration and upload some variations very soon. And yes, the seahorse element is identical for both entries, the only difference was the color of the text.