Like your style with these and incorporating ribbon with name. I think it needs to be a bit more 'glitzy' so it has a bit of fashion flare to it as well as denoting a hunting/camo feel. Definitely like incorporating "it's not just a guy thing" as that has been part of our event for 6 year. Want our logo somewhere....could be small on front or back of t-shirt. The two with the arrow are a bit 'too modern/contemporary' for our customer base. Think....'western'....piney woods......deer hunter......see some examples of camo clothing on our website...www.wulfoutdoorsports.com.
i revised the logo considerably...added a nightime forest scene with pines and a moon/stars....also added a woodsy feel with woodgrain banner containing the logo, etc, kind of like you would see in a hunting cabin. this is more of a t-shirt design...
one on black and one on pink....it could look good on a camo print shirt too.
Entries 15 & 16 - Definitely more "woodsy" in feel but seem a bit "too country". Want more sophification but with an outdoor twist. Maybe focus a bit more "Ladies Night Out - 2010" as the event and "it's more than a guy thing" as the tag line....separate them. Definitely like the logo inserted into the artwork.
Idea -take a target and put it in background of design to the right. - have an arrow shooting through words or ribbon to target - change font on "it's not just a guy thing to be script font
Anyway to take entry #2.....add the year "2010" and the Wulf logo somewhere....keep everything else but maybe put the whole graphic inside a 'wolf' outline....or a "deer" outline....something to give it a more "hunting - outdoor - rugged" feel?