I like where #54 is headed. I think a rotation of the tablet may help.
I copy/pasted your logo with a change here:
http://www2.franchiseterritorydesign.com/other/logo/logoidea.pngLet me know when you've seen it, and I'll take it down off the web.
It is very crude (graphics are NOT my thing). What I'm trying to convey is:
how the tablet is rotated.
relative size of desired fonts (the colors in my picture clash with you map, so that isn't what I'm suggesting).
Is it possible to simplify the map a little (the three pushpins and their shadows may be cluttering it a bit).