I liked those better as well but I thought I should show the colors that you mentioned in you creative brief. The tagline in both versions gets a little lost due to the size and light color. It was much more visible when larger on my screen when I was creating it. Would you like to see any other color combinations, different fonts or any other changes made to any of these? Thanks for your feedback.
I like the free flowing letters - I find it soft and elegant. You are right the tag line does get lost due to lose of size and color. What if you took down the font size on the wow - so its not so dominant and take the tag line up slightly.
I am open to colors quite frankly - I hate limiting an artist - its your creative right!!!!!! My only desire is that the colors compliment each other. I don't want a heavy overly exagerated (can't spell) color contrast. They colors need to be in harmony in a soft balance. How would soft brown (earthy - not tan) and a teal blue - soft blue. I'm open.................