Thank you for the contribution. Too busy, that is too much going on outside of the fox. More of an character icon that can stand alone without any writing whatsoever. I would like to see a traditional bushy foxes tail. I would like to see the fox with no clothing or accesories outside of the golf club (the club should be the only accesory). Similar to the traditional bushy tail, I would like to see some traditional fur color patterns on the fox, i.e., the tip of the tail the under belly, etc... Be careful not to make the fox too feminine when the clothes come off. Overall, I like your take on the fox and its blend between cartoon and reality. With a bit of cleaning up in the direction of a more simplistic view I think you are on the right track. The overall idea is to have the fox be able to stand alone with no background or writing, or at most a very subtle one piece type background, so that it becomes an icon wherein either one knows what it represents or does not. Good first draft, I look forward to seeing more.