All great variations - #21 - not crazy about that... #25 and 23 in right direction - maybe a variation with less distinction on the word "Yonder" from the rest of the text.
Yonder needs to be more part of the entire phrase, it's called out too much as a thing as apposed to "wild Blue Yonder" and a complete concept... I like you designs though...
We cannot use all caps for this type face since script fonts never work as all caps, there for I had to remvoe the ribbon because "Yonder" would be to small.
would like to experiment with a dark red (marroon) or dark green very think pencil line - perhaps around the letters or the oval. just add a very slight amount of a third color but not to overpower or distract from the base logo.
We cannot go to dark with an accent colour because visually will bleed into the over all look,
Adding a third outline I had to drop the dark blue outline down, this this give a wee bit more depth and action to the over look and feel. even if you do not go with a third outline I'd like to keep the dark-blue outline dropped down