Hi Ryo, just spoke with the team... there are concerns that it is too playful... you were right. But we love the boldness and strength of the design. Feel free to make changes you think will work. Maybe changing the font? btw - the exclamation point in not necessary in the design.
We do think having the letter O larger than the other lletters is important...
#59 make text all caps and needs to be a little bolder... too thin Make the top of the O blue Make the cloud outline grey for now (we can try other color combinations later) the other two bars above the O should gradient from blue to grey (towards the cloud) Make the cloud it's own distictive shape.. it doesn't need to bounce over the letters what do you think?
Also, #34... make the cloud bigger so WHOA! fits inside of it. We still like this look, just don't know if it's corporate enough...
Hi Ryo, Thanks for the changes... I prefer the shape of the cloud you use in #59. I really like the shape of the cloud Apple uses for the iCloud logo... especially the thickness of the shape. The cloud you used in 110-113 looks long and flat, and even a little too thin.. We definitely want a distinct cloud shape since it depicts the service provided. Letd get a cool shaoe then work on placement of text and how to show movement of data.. hope this helps.
Hi Ryo, we like the colors used in #111 use a regular letter O with 3 lines above it. Don't make the lines too wide, closer to the length in you have in #59 The cloud shape needs to change so it's not as crowded on top of the text.
HI Ryo, just want you to know that the team likes yours best... just waiting on your revisions :) We'll also be interested in seeing a version with the domain name whoa.com instead of WHOA!
can we get another version of #144 where the cloud is taller... so it doesn't look so flat
What do you think of moving the data lines closer to the cloud? You don't need to do all the color variations right now... just the scheme used in #144 Thanks
Wanted to let you know that we like #134 and #144 Ther is something about the way http://gogreencloud.com/ uses the data lines in the cloud that is appealing... not to take you too far off track...for your reference David
We like #154 the best so far... can we move the lines down just a little bit closer to the O Also need the lines to be a little narrower from left to right Thanks
I'm still waiting for feedback on #160 and #161 from the team. The height of teh cloud in #154 is perfect... is there an way you can accomplish that with the design elements in #160 & #161
Good morning Ryo, Let me knwo if you can work on a revision or two in the next couple hours. I'm trying to get as close as possible for to team to look in the morning. Thx, David
Well, I have tried using different fonts but unfortunately each font has their own size and kerning, and that made the placement of letter O won't match with the signal / data lines..
That makes sense... btw - there are a couple of your designs we like and we're trying to fine tune. Is your email the same as it was 2 years ago... I want to email an idea
yes, still the same email address.. but I suggest that we keep communicate through logotournament because this site has rules which not allowing designers to contact clients during the contest although I've won your previous contest... unless you ended the contest first then I'm allowed to communicate directly via emails. No worries, although you have pick me as the winner, I'm still welcome to do any revisions as much as you want until it's perfect. You can count on me, david :)
Hi Ryo, Just spoke with the team... Congrats!! You are the winner! We still need a couple minor fixes to the change we just made before picking a final version.
We need to see another with those same bands still a little narrower. Also, we don't want to lose the cloud shape, lets keep the roundness of the bumps, we don't mind a little white space between the data lines and where it breaks through the cloud shape like in my example.
HI Ryo, hopefully the last change request :) #186 and #187. One more of each... do not change the text, do not change the cloud shape of either. The three lines that create the data signal need to have their width reduced by 10%. Everything else in fine.
one more edit... #189 is 1st place. There is a little bit of white space to the left of the letter W, Can you make the .com part a little smaller so we can end up with a little white space to the right of the .com to get a little more balance.
Hi Ryo, I sent the last message (above) on the 19th but didn't get a revision yet. do you have any questions about it? I'm trying to get the WHOA.com balnced a little better inside the cloud.
I have a meeting with the team in the morning, for final decisions :)