You're cleaver. I like the i that makes one think of the individual, however, it seems crowded and there isn't anything else to tie in a concept of White spaces. I really do want to see a graphic with the logo. Some how the concept of empty spaces that can be filled needs to stand out and that it's about people. Thanks.
new idea - the exclamation mark ( ! ) represents knowledge that began with the individual ( i ) who's experience was filtered through social interaction and experience ( i!i!i! ).
Really like where you're headed. Would like to see a W somehow in the graphic. Also, the font for the text just does not look as professional as needed. Cool thoughts.
#22 It's very distinctive and memorable. Clean and would show up well for numerous uses. Also, I like the shadows. What I’m having to think about is how it really conveys WhiteSpace.
#22 - a simple concept really - the whitespace is a W acting as the filament in the bulb and the bulb, of course, is a symbol of ideas, imagination, and learning. I had thought I might try adding a couple smaller ones in the background, each standing as a metaphor for people.
#31 Apples, for me, align too closely to school...not everyone has good memories of that and I don't want to reflect elementry learning approaches. Tks
# 30 Another with possibiliites...clean and would show up well and one can infer learning from others. Still struggle with the W and I think the base of the bulbs needs to be less cartoonish.
#55 can you do a smaller wave style w on it's side and make it look like it's inside the bulb, also do more with the font colors and design for WhiteSpace? We like your work a lot. Can you see the feedback I've left about fonts elsewhere?
Hey, thanks. I like that it's a thinner line...can you put it on the other two bulbs for consistancy. Don't like the dots in the word Space. COuld you show me the word space with a little more spacing between the letters and in a color?
#116 Steve, we really think this one is getting close. We saw another one thismorning with script that looked hand written and that supports the concept of informatl learning. Could you show us somehting similar with the handwritten font used for "learning". Not sure about the red, could we try a deeper red and also another shade of blue? Really good work.
#155 Don't like that. If you can see 134 that's more what we were looking at, like a hand written lettering, not a true script. Sorry if I confused you. To show you, I'll put it back out as a top choice for a while.
Can you make the l in learning a cap L, also show me Space in a few different colors like the blue in the bulb and perhaps another deep color. Here's the big question. I've showed it to several people and some think it's not clean enough. So, as a alternative for me to look at, can you make the bulb white instead of blue...I'm not sure, however it might work. Let me know if you can. THanks.
#116 Good morning. Ok, 116 seems to tbe the closest to what we'll need. Would like the Learning from 173 with a little more spacing between the letters. Also, the word Space in a deep burnt orange...or is that what there.