Whitehouse Family Dentistry PALogo Design Contest

I need a house and more colors.

Can you try one without the tooth and emphasize Family Dentistry a bit more

A little more space between Whitehouse and family dentistry so top of F doesn't touch.

Can you give the house another color?

I think my partner will like your design. He designed our website. However I like a simpler look with techno vibe incorporated. This may be hard to blend.

Can you do one with the W as a tooth but keep the swirl on it?

We are not crazy about the boxed background

Could you outline the roof in green

Could you change the font from swirly to something else. He doesn't mind the W being swirly.

My partner is a dude and he doesn't like the swirly. He likes old fashion font.

Please let me know what you think of the font on #125. I am still looking to see if I can find a better fit. I want the "W" to blend well with the font so that your customers will not see the tooth right away. That is of course if you pick my design... lol

I tried one #127 with a more formal font. I would love to hear your thoughts. Based on the ranking I am guessing you did not care for the handwritten fonts?

It's so hard!

I love the swirly font but I have to meet him in the middle. He did say the way our heading is written on the website is good. I think he likes a skinnier swirl on the W if it's going to have one.

Also, what if we took the approach of a more contemporary font on a few.

He likes entry 58 maybe with different font

I would like a blend of 91 and 83...I like all the colors and green swish of 91...we are not crazy about the clouds although they are cute...and I think we like the house without the vertical line on the right...I would rather family dentistry not have a line under it

Thank you for the feedback! I tried something different on #128 since so many designs seem to be going in the same direction I thought I would try something a little different. I will work on the changes you requested above.
Thanks,
Leah

Also, what was it about #83 that you like better than #91?

I like 83's font (personally) and there is no vertical line i like the colors but overall i like the conciseness and compactness of it

I watch Mad Men and honestly you might have to tell us what we like so we don't mess you up...I should probably post that in the general comment section lol

lol.... Just curious how you got the name "Whitehouse" Is there an actually white house that your dentistry is out of? If so, would it be possible to get a picture?

Entry 127 - Regular W and no line and maroon with outline in green and green second line

Entry 129 - Regular W and green second line

Entry 139 - Regular W and green second line

I think we are getting it narrowed down ( my husband is weighing in now)

Please see #153, #154 and #155 for the requested changes.
Thanks,
Leah

I tried one that looks like your roofline of your office on #158. I was thinking it mike be good to have the association between your logo and your actual roof line. I am curious to see what you think about it.
Thanks,
Leah

Everyone likes 128 alot - could you bold the family dentistry or change the font color...something to make it stand out

165 is a hit as well but my partner said its too much roof...I thinkhe needs a little height to it?

Thank you for the feedback, man I was really excited about the new ones! lol Ok I will work on changes.
Thanks,
Leah

OK I'm sure we are wearing you out

on 128 if the Family Dentistry could stand our more like on 165
and you can take off the PA

that way it can be enlarged and made darker

the house in full was cute but the roof looks better I think

Could the realistic roof be made a bit taller so it's not so flat?

So to finish up this design there are 2 things...the Family Dentistry needs to be a little less close to the Whitehouse word...more like 178 and 155

And could the grass and family dentistry be darker just like 178 and 155

Absolutely! Making those changes now.

OK I'm messing you up - just make the font proportional and the way you think it looks best...i'm getting off scale

Take a look at #213. I do like the darker color as it stands out more. Let me know what you think.
Thanks,
Leah

213 looks great! One more thing...what about incorporating something dental-ish like ? Some ppl said a tooth where the O is or making the grass into a tooth brush

Thanks, I will see what I can come up with...

We like the one with just the tooth...could it be less round/heart like?

We are going to end contest by tonight so this is almost over....I won't be stretching it out 7 whole days with changes lol!

Sounds good! I will work on that now.

Can you remove swoosh and outline house in green?

We put logo on scrubs with our name under it and swoosh may push name too far down

And could you do a swoosh with the bristles on the left? My partner would like to see that

I think this will be it for changes :)

He's deciding about tooth in the O place

I uploaded the one without the swoosh and the green outline and the one with the bristles on the left.

could the crevice in the tooth be a little more pronounced and could you do some little roots...I will try to upload a pic of what I saw

I will look for the pic.. I just want to give you the heads up. I have a very busy evening and going to be out of town tomorrow. I will try to work on this late tonight if possible.

Ok thank you for all the revisions and ideas!!! Enjoyed working with you :)

I was my pleasure! I have uploaded your final files. I will be out of town for the rest of the day but if you need any additional changes I will be back tomorrow. If you are happy with them you will just need to click the "Approve" link under My Account > My Ended contests to complete the process. Thanks for choosing my design and I hope you enjoy your new logo!
Thanks,
Leah