#1 Like where your going with it so far, especially with the image, just trying to look for the right emblem. I like the concept of the apple shape in #10 and #9. And I like the way you incorporated the slogan without it being too busy. "Whitehaven" is the location of the office and should be one continuous word as in entry #10. Can you try a blue-green combo like the colors in the "Squeaky Clean" and "Urgent Consult" logos on this site? The orange isn't quite working, but will consider a multi-colored logo or any other suggestions. Also consider a 3D effect for the emblem similar to the "Health Wizard" logo elsewhere on the site. Thanks.
#2 a) Can you make the colors bolder, similar to the other logos I mentioned? b) Please shrink the emblem slightly. b) I Like the 3D effect. Can you invert the image, where the figures dance against a solid background, similar to the "Health Wizard" logo? Otherwise looks good. Thanks.
#3 Awesome the way you incorporated the slogan with the logo! Two thumbs up! a) Can you take the "plus" sign out of the latest logo, then attempt a few color combinations, including the initial blue-green combo! I do like the bold colors. b) Can you utilize the emblem and type from the previous logo with similar combo's as well? Place the emblem of the previous logo to the left of the type, as you did with the current logo, so that I can compare apples to apples. Looking good!
#5 Cool. Just a few more variations... a) Reverse the figures in the apple where the larger figure is on the left and the smaller on the right, maybe symbolizing move from obese to normal weight, as the viewers eye moves from left to right. Hope this works design-wise. b) Color variation... after reversing figures, change the plum color in entry #16 to blue, and keep the other colors the same. c) Can you insert the type from entry #12 into design of entry #17. Almost there...
#6 Two quick tweaks... a) Superimpose the lettering from entry #37 over the emblem for entry #30. b) As a second entry, make the "apple" and the word "whitehaven" solid blue, and keep the "apple leaves" and the words "weight loss" solid green. Thanks again.
#7 On entry #42, now I know why that combination didn't work! Lol!! Can you lower the underline beneath the "weight loss" maybe 1 mm so that less of the hook on the "g" is obscured. Now all I need is some color tweaks on this design. Can you overlay the color scheme of entry #16 on entry #30 and #41? I think I really like these two choices. Can you think of any other colors in place of the "plum" that might also work for this design?
#8 Can you add back the color gradient from entry #16 to entry #47, which looks awesome. The color of entry #47 appears much flatter than entry #16, or maybe its just my eyes!
#9 Entry #51 so far appears to look the best. Are there any other reds or purples that look good against the green, in place of the current plum color?
#10 Final question I have is one of font for "your weight loss home" beneath entry #51. a) How would the words "weight loss" in the font from entry #46, appear if placed within entry #51? This would be different from entry #46 because the slogan would again become part of the name instead of being placed beneath it. b) If "your" and "home" clashes with the newly inserted "weight loss" font, how would it appear if you placed "your" and "home" in black cursive using the font of these words from entry #46, on either side. Reasoning ... searching here for something that would possibly look good on a letter as well as on a billboard. Thanks again.
#11 Awesome! Please replace the green in "weight loss" from my current 1st rank --- your entry #69, with the blue color from entry #73. Is 3 colors too many for a corporate logo? Thanks for your patience without end. Close to the end!
#12 Tryn to fine tune a few minor things... a) change the color of the underline in entry #69 and #74 to black, and b) increase slightly the font size of the cursive "your" and "home" also in entry #69 and #74. Thanks.
#13 Final comparisons: a) Change color of the underline on entry #89 from black to plum, and b) increase font size of "your" and "home" on entry #66, where it is larger than the current font, but smaller than letters in "weight loss." Appreciate you.
#14 Entry #92 still holding strong. Is the slogan line centered? The "y" in "your" seems to overlap the left margin of "Whitehaven" above, whereas the "e" in "home" doesn't overlap the right margin of "Whitehaven" above. Maybe the word "weight loss" isn't centered? I don't know...
#16 Entry #92 appears to be slightly better balanced than entry #103. Although the "y" has been moved over to the right, the "e" has been moved over to the left. Did you shrink the font slightly? What is the major difference between the two entries? Thanks.