Thank you so much for all these amazing options. This is the winner, with three minor edits. 1, can you reduce the size of the bush next to the barn so that it is 1/2 the size it is now? 2. Can you make the barn the orange color that it was previously? 3. can you please put the text back to the font in #434 and please make sure that you leave a space between the n in weston and the A in ahead. That will do it!! Thank you so much!!
3. With the above changes can you also show us a change in the font of the tagline to fully be beneath the Weston Ahead (stretched out to start under the W and end under the D)
2. please remove the tree to the right of the barn and replace with nothing. Also please change tree in the foreground to show more of its branches and to be the color of this sugar maple (see image:https://www.dropbox.com/s/b51u84ax3vj4cyn/sugar%20maple.jpg?dl=0). We would also like to see the barn the same color as this sugar maple tree
Just spoke with client. This is the top choice, but we have a few final tweaks we would like to see. I will make each their own comment.
1. please remove the tree to the right of the barn and replace with a rhododendron plant- no flowers just the bush (see image: https://www.dropbox.com/s/71h1wviuuwh51k9/rhododendron%20plant.jpg?dl=0). Also please change tree in the foreground to show more of its branches (see previous tree you created in #361)
the client is definitely preferring this barn, I wonder if we could find a reddish brown color for the barn that we could also make the tree in the front? They are wanting it to look more like a sugar maple tree so it feels like New England. Then I was thinking we could have the barn be that same color to tie them in together. Also, they are wanting to simplify this a bit-and still want to feel like it is moving forward. Can we dump all the green and white lines in the foreground and instead have one green "path" that takes us straight back? To feel like we are moving forward down a path?
finally, they would like to make sure this will look good in black and white!
thats a lot I know, but we are super close! Thanks!
I think this is more the direction the client is thinking with the barn. Is it also possible to just have the farmland further in the background rather than in the foreground?
apologies for the delay in responses, we have had a little staff turnover. The client is really liking the direction that you are going. Would it be possible though to shift the placement of the wall so that it looks like they are moving ahead Right now the wall seems to be framing in the farm area. Thanks!
Shape is perfect. Just a little more 'faded' or further away, like the previous version, and I think we'll be there. Right now it is just a little too sharp compared to the rest of the abstract logo. We'll be talking about the logo in a few hours.
Hi, Viki! I think this is almost perfect. However, the shape of the Weston Rec Center is a little unusual. It doesn't have straight walls. I think if you could capture its shape, it would be recognizable as Weston.
We like what you've done so far, but realize that our additions risk looking confusing in black-and-white/grayscale. We think this version is best so far because of the balance between the trees on the left and the trees on the right. We love your style and the back-and-forth "slashes" of the logo! Sorry for the change in direction.
Here's how we would like to finish this logo:
Feel free to keep it simpler, even removing pieces if you have to.
More deciduous trees (beech, maple, oak) not just pine trees
Keep the left-right balance
Try to call out the agriculture/field element in another way. You can remove trees or walls if you need to to make this work.
You don't have to keep all of the elements in any given logo (e.g: you can focus on just the field or just the rec center as an experimental addition.)
Great work, and we love the variety of options here. We are having a few meetings to discuss, but before we do, I wonder: could you show me a version of this one where the hill in the top right has a very small, potentially abstract solar panel?
I'm thinking that you could make a series of blue rectangles that curves like the rest of the hills. I hate to ask for updates when you have provided so many great choices, but I think I would like to show this specific option to the committee.
We love this logo, and would like to start refining it. We also liked the version without the tree in the front.
Here are some suggestions for final versions:
1) We'd like to see more variety of trees in the back, such as coniferous (not pine) trees.
2) It might be nice to make that middle strip of green into a furrowed, yellow field (like a farm)
3) We are interested in a version that does not have a tree in the front, but has small solar panels or other sustainability building on the hill in the far back.
We really like this logo, but think there might be slightly too many walls. Could we see a version in which there are only 2? The walls in Weston also have some round stones among the square ones.
Feel free to try adding some sort of natural element to the horizon. Otherwise, good work!
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1. please remove the tree to the right of the barn and replace with a rhododendron plant- no flowers just the bush (see image: https://www.dropbox.com/s/71h1wviuuwh51k9/rhododendron%20plant.jpg?dl=0). Also please change tree in the foreground to show more of its branches (see previous tree you created in #361)
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finally, they would like to make sure this will look good in black and white!
thats a lot I know, but we are super close! Thanks!
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Thanks so much!
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Here's how we would like to finish this logo:
Feel free to keep it simpler, even removing pieces if you have to.
More deciduous trees (beech, maple, oak) not just pine trees
Keep the left-right balance
Try one of these ideas:
Try rec center on top left in place of trees (or fewer trees)
The rec center has a very unique shape that we thought would be good to include: https://www.weston.org/ImageRepository/Document?documentID=20397
Try to call out the agriculture/field element in another way. You can remove trees or walls if you need to to make this work.
You don't have to keep all of the elements in any given logo (e.g: you can focus on just the field or just the rec center as an experimental addition.)
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I'm thinking that you could make a series of blue rectangles that curves like the rest of the hills. I hate to ask for updates when you have provided so many great choices, but I think I would like to show this specific option to the committee.
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We love this logo, and would like to start refining it. We also liked the version without the tree in the front.
Here are some suggestions for final versions:
1) We'd like to see more variety of trees in the back, such as coniferous (not pine) trees.
2) It might be nice to make that middle strip of green into a furrowed, yellow field (like a farm)
3) We are interested in a version that does not have a tree in the front, but has small solar panels or other sustainability building on the hill in the far back.
Hopefully that's clear!
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We really like this logo, but think there might be slightly too many walls. Could we see a version in which there are only 2? The walls in Weston also have some round stones among the square ones.
Feel free to try adding some sort of natural element to the horizon. Otherwise, good work!
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