Remove the yellow in the shield, and I wonder if you make the lettering white and then make one with gray scrolling and one with gold scrolling. I like the shape of the letters and the symbols inside the crest. See if that works.
Thank you so much for your rank and feedback, here's my revised version (#48 and #49). no color gradation so its easy to use and apply on other media (sticker, t shirt, etc) hope you like it