West Allis Smiles DentalLogo Design Contest

Boy, that looks really bad, but hopefully you get what we're going for.

Our owner is wondering if you could make the WA icon taller and then have West Allis Smiles Dental stacked more vertically to the right of it. I'll demonstrate with the markup tools.

Thank you!

hello.
I've made the changes and uploaded the new design to #455, #456.
Thanks and kind regards

I know we're running past our deadline here, but we have you in our top four designs. We're just trying to see what this design would look like if it was more horizontally oriented: Could we see the abstract WA shape to the left of "West Allis Smiles Dental"? Also, can you make the smile shape stand out a little more from the rest of the abstract design? Maybe make it the same lime green color as the word "Dental"? Thanks for all your work!

Very fun and creative incorporation of the West Allis elements. Nice work.

Really like what's happening here!

Hello.
I have uploaded some new concepts on #390 #391 #393.
I will keep developing some more concepts and upload them as soon as I am done with them.
Thanks and kind regards

Getting you up to the top spot now…understand if this won't come in until tomorrow.

Hello.
Thank you for the information and feedback.
I'll work on a few more concepts in line with the new information and a few wildcards and upload them as soon as you reshuffle the rankings.

Thanks and kind regards.

I have heard feedback from the owner of this office, and he's concerned there is not, overall, enough variation in the designs. I know that the selection phase isn't the best time to ask this, but if I move you into the top position in the next day, I'd appreciate seeing some creative departures from the work you've already created. Particularly, the owner isn't thrilled with designs that simply have smile shapes next to or incorporated into the name of the office. We'd appreciate you trying to think outside the box a bit when creating variations on the ideas you've already presented. Some potential ideas to consider: West Allis is very manufacturing based, and it's home to the Wisconsin State Fair and the stadium where the Milwaukee Brewers play baseball. Thank you for all you work!

Thanks for these updates!

Hello.
Thank you for the feedback.
I'll make the changes and upload the new concepts shortly.
Thanks again and kind regards

You know, with a subtle tweak, your abstract element could look a lot more like the initials of West Allis Smiles. I don't want to rip off Under Armor, but leaving a little gab between the two different colored "V" shapes allows it to look like a "W" and an "A" when the smile goes through the gap.

Thanks for these updates.

I can't help but seeing two people armwrestling with these latest updates. Still like the overall feel, but that's hard to overcome.

This design has a lot of potential. I like the color and font choices. I like that the abstract design feels retro fun. I think maybe it could come across as more of a "W" shape (maybe with a suggestion of an "A" as well).