Paull, #33 is a great idea. I love the idea but the font choice makes the logo worse looking that the logos we ranked ahead of it. Could you try experimenting with better looking fonts (see the top 3 we ranked) and colors to see if we could take this great idea to its full potential?
BTW, I think your italics work better than the non-italics font styles of the first 3 logos. I think the font just needs to look more solid, like those used in the first 3.