That's it! Thanks for being so patient. I'm going to declare a winner and will ask you for the following please: full color version just like this, full color all black background version (no white circle), all white version (like 131), black and white version (like 122), different black and white version (like 132), and grayscale version (like 125). If you could please send high res jpg and AI CS6 (I have an old version) formats that would be tremendous. Also I sent you a note on FB. Thanks!!
Maybe what's throwing me off is that the W is so much wider than the other letters in Gotham. Can you maybe reduce the width of the W's to like 98%? And could you rotate the bottom text just a TINY bit to the right please? Sorry, if I had any Photoshop skills I would do this stuff myself.
Bottom text done. Top text - is it my imagination or is there a touch more space between the wing and W than the wing and S? Like do we need to rotate the text a tiny bit to the left? Also W-O looks more spaced than O-S. I don't think it is, it's just the shape of the letters, but can you try to even this all out a bit please? Thanks.
Yeah this is nice, thanks. Last thing is just a bit of tweaking to the font. Can you tighten the character spacing on the bottom text a tiny bit please? I'd like a touch more black between the text and wings (like the top text). Also just a tiny bit bolder on the bullet point please.
Can you please pull the second wing feathers in a touch so they're actually not touching the outer border? And please black fill the two tiny white triangles between the tail feathers.
Yes very cool, but remove the little pieces marked - I just want the line to hit the tailfeathers like you did with the wings. Also can you pull the second feathers in just a tiny bit so they intersect perfectly with the lines?
Close. Can you remove the tiny triangle feathers and pull the next feathers over and down to fill the gap? Also dot before 2005 needs to be moved up and please make it a tiny bit bolder.
Hey thanks for your patience, I've had a really tough time choosing but I think we can get you to the finish line in first place. 143 is my favorite version but there's a couple things I'd like to tweak.
I like the change in wing style from 142, but I think now it's a little TOO busy. So could we do something somewhere between the two? Closer to 143 but not as busy - maybe you could remove a couple feathers and/or shorten the black lines a bit. Just feels a bit too full right now. Also I'd prefer the feathers not protrude outside the circle as much - 142 is nice because they just poke out a little bit. Thanks.
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I like the change in wing style from 142, but I think now it's a little TOO busy. So could we do something somewhere between the two? Closer to 143 but not as busy - maybe you could remove a couple feathers and/or shorten the black lines a bit. Just feels a bit too full right now. Also I'd prefer the feathers not protrude outside the circle as much - 142 is nice because they just poke out a little bit. Thanks.
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