I thought I'd work a little on the details of this design, as well as add the stars you asked for in the brief. :) I made the little boy and girl less chubby, I made each child's color skin different for more diversity. I also made each kid's legs' position different. I changed the little girl's outfit, as all the girls were wearing dresses, so I made her wear a skirt and a T-shirt with a star. :) I moved the tagline under the company name and made a few other small changes. I'm here for your feedback.
I really like the design. If I were to edit anything about it, it would be related to the children above the text. I think the image is very well done; however, I don't like the two children that appear 'chibi-like'. We could talk more about that later when/if you advance the next stage. Other than that, I am very fond of this logo.
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I thought I'd work a little on the details of this design, as well as add the stars you asked for in the brief. :) I made the little boy and girl less chubby, I made each child's color skin different for more diversity. I also made each kid's legs' position different. I changed the little girl's outfit, as all the girls were wearing dresses, so I made her wear a skirt and a T-shirt with a star. :) I moved the tagline under the company name and made a few other small changes. I'm here for your feedback.
Warmly, Andra
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Thank you for your prompt response,
Alejandro
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Thank you for your ranking and feedback. I can change the chibi thingy, if you tell me which kids you're referring to. :)
Warmly, Andra
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