I like the foundation you've built for this logo here, the organization of the font looks nice. Hopefully down the line you can add a little more pizzazz to it, to make it pop a little more
This may not jive with the orange well, but is there we can get the gray in #98 changed up to a vibrant blue, aside from the camera (which would remain gray)? Want to see if some color variation could make this pop more; maybe bringing a third into the mix would suffice. Thx.
sorry... missed the deadline...however it wont be a problem to do the color revisions in case you decide to go with my design... I am not allowed to get specific about weaknesses of other designs but I definitely point out the strength of mine....
Based on my 8 years of experience In corporate identity I would say that an image which is too cartoon/comic like is definitely not appropriate for your target group (18 - 34) and would be rather appropriate for 12-18.. For some good reasons I would also recommend completely leaving the character illustration....