This is a bit to masculine. I think you should think more in line of your logo Alyser. Spotify is also a logo I like, and something similiar to that style would be a great.
Your entries so far have been way more simplistic designs than what I'm looking for. Think Web 2.0! Either do some customization to the font or add a pictogram e.g. to make it more unique, and a bit "louder". I hope you will stay in the competition though, because I really like many of the designs in your portfolio, so I now you can do so much better.