Hmm...I like this. A couple of things...could you make those little shapes look a little more like the "text balloons" (not sure what they're called...hopefully you know what I mean)...this could represent people talking to each other...collaborating. Also, go with a little more vibrant, primary colors...and make the "vyzit" all grey. And/or any other ideas you might have. I'm looking for a mark that denotes collaboration, and this is on the right track.
One more thing. As you revise this one (which I'm very excited to see with the above feedback) you may want to look at the "V" and "Y". As it is, they look like a "W" because they're connected. Might get confusing.
I love the colors, and I like the font better now. However, I like the way the shapes are oriented in the previous version better...more at an angle. And, I was hoping to see a version where the shapes were shaped like the "text bubbles" on an iPhone SMS message. Do you know what I mean? Where the bubble points to the speaker. I don't know if this would make sense, but it might be interesting.
So, I guess I would like to see the exact same version as #66, except with the color bubbles. And, would love to see a version with the "text bubbles", if you think that makes sense.
I really like #82. However, the center area looks really "jagged", and, it looks a LITTLE like a swaztika. That obviously wasn't your intention, but it's the first thing we noticed. Any way to clean that up?
yes you did, so sorry. I was told to remove it because another designer used the Z and I connecting before I did and they claim excluseive to that but will do somethign else
That makes me mad. Several people did the same thing. This is MY logo, not that other designer...and if I want the "z" and the "i" connected I should be able to ask for it. I'm the one paying $450 for this thing. I think that whole thing sours me on this LogoTournament all together. The priority should be getting the client what they want/need.