Thanks for the submission! For Vixie, please give her a purple t-shirt instead of tank. The makeup she has is a bit intense. She's working out, so if she has makeup on, it would be very subtle.
I'd like to see a little more of Vixie.
Also, the circle, I'm not loving it, but I don't know what the alternative would be. Is there a way to incorporate a kettlebell in there?
Also, I like the way the other designers have incorporated something like pixie dust. BUT, some go too far. I don't want it to be all about the pixie dust and I don't want it to be too "cutsie"
Again, Thank you for your submission. I think this is getting much closer to the vibe I am going for. Wanted to add a few more comments along with the ones above...
I would like for her more muscular, but not like she is on steroids.
I like her hair, but can you show more of her ponytail sprouting up and off to side of hair tie.
Can you place a bit pixie dust bursting out behind her in the background, not too much, instead of the lines bursting out from behind her?
Maybe she she could surrounded by that outline of a kettlebell instead of just a circle. The color of the border being similar to weight in her hand?
Can Vixie be in purple with metal gray outline, like weight in her hand. Fit be black with metal gray outline.
okay no problem, I'll be back with the changes. What about the pose? do you like it? or maybe I should completely change the character with the new one? Please tell me what you think
Thanks for your help! Here are some more thoughts...
- Again, she is muscular, but femininely muscular, not too big. ( I know, it may seem a little confusing ;) )
- Can you change her positioning so that she is somewhat leaning up against the word "VixieFit'?
- Her hair is a little darker brown, purple hair tie at top of ponytail?
- She has a fiesty but playful wink in her eye.
- She has on a purple tshirt, little black shorts, purple knee high tube socks with white rings around top, smaller (not as chunky as in previous images) black low top Converse like sneakers, and black wrist straps on.
- She is flexing one arm to show off the guns while resting the other one on her hip.
- She is standing with one foot resting on top of a barbell with big silver plates loaded on each side of the barbell.
- Please incorporate the "pretty powerful" slogan somewhere, maybe on side underneath barbell?