Like entry #10, must include the tag line." Zero Calories all Facts" Needs to be more interesting feels like its still missing something. #9 and #8 don't feel like they are health related
Like this much better like the feel of the symbol. Like the color like flow. Zero calories needs to stand out more Try a different symbol instead of a leaf. Maybe Like a Chinese symbol for yin and yang. Tag line needs to stand out more
Hi thanks for letting me see what the yin-yang looks like in entry 48. I still like entry #13 better. In entry 48 the yin-yang which is in a shape of a sphere, and the the symbol its in, is also in a shape of a sphere makes it look like a ball. Do you think in #48 you can leave a space between the yin and the yang, so it looks like they are flowing closer together but not joined. Than like in entry 13 where you have the leaf coming off the v, you would instead have the yin which is the blue part, flowing and forming into itself from the blue part of the symbol (where the yin-yang in # 48 now sits), and the yang which is the lighter grey part forming into itself from v part (lighter grey area) of the symbol. Think water flowing together. The word Vitality and tag line look like they stand out more in #13. Its so hard to communicate in words what you are thinking in a picture, I hope that you understand what I was trying to get across. Thank you for your designs!
Hi Thank you for submitting the last design #54. I do like it more than the concept in 50. However I still think I like #13 better. I just wish we can change the leaf to something more related to health. Maybe symbol of a heart.Maybe a symbol of the yin-yang symbol flowing together in a shape of a heart. the reason I think 13 looks more balances is because you have two different shapes. The leaf and the sphere. The other designs 50 and and even 54 still have aspects of a sphere inside a sphere. which makes loo to much like a ball. I hope I'm making sense . Thank you for your time