Vista Palomar ParkLogo Design Contest

Overall: really like how design reflects architecture; The palm fronds are a bit too much.

#6: gives the impression more of a hotel rather than a retail shopping center
#5: we like the use of colors > could you attempt to make this design a little more inviting
#4: don't like the green coloring below the text, but do like the multi-color

hi
thanks for the feedback and comments
I'm working on the suggestions.
Best Regards

Fernando

#16 is great. The V below Vista Palomar Park is a bit distracting. Maybe you could play around with that?

I don't know how I feel about the palm trees. Can you play with this too?

Also, something to keep in mind, if we printed a T-Shirt with the logo, fewer colors is ideal.

looking great! nice work!

#26-#29 are great.

#28 Can you try make the text white and leaving the rest blue?

Thanks for the other options.

#29 Can you take out the little tips on the center "building" in the middle?

Also, is there a way for you to extend the upper part of the 'K' in "PARK" so it is the same height as the other letters.

Could I also see the design with a different font - trying maybe a font with cleaner lines - for comparison?

Hi and thank you for considering my work. Here is the update request
The entry number #41 is the Art-Deco Typography.
entry number #42 is more modern style

thanks
Fernando

#41 and #42 are looking fantastic! I like having the white background. Can you play with the black and grey and try using other colors (or different shades of the same color) for what is currently black and grey?

Thanks! Great job!

hi
thanks for the comment
I will work with duo tones.
this is very economical to implement in printing.
Only use an ink. do not lose business identity
People always see the same logo - web - clothing - print etc
thanks
Fernando