Thank you for your beautiful design. It (they) incorporate many of the elements I was hoping for. I really like the bended grain and the seed references. I most like the open as opposed to the closed seeds and that the tag line is present. I would like to see a flax flower incorporated into the design as well. Maybe the words could also be seen through the window pane of the oven on a faint cookie sheet, repesenting the act of something baking....Could the lettering also be softened a bit...Feel free to play with these suggestions if you like...I look forward to seeing the next iteration.
The ancient kitchen is GORGEOUS ! The only change I would make is that I would lighten up the kitchen. My kitchenis this enlightened place...when I work I burn incense, play music and and the sun streams in! Maybe add more grians red quinoa,spelt, sorghum, almonds, flax seeds and all their range of colors in a mixing bowl and plants maybe even hanging from the ceiling...Soften the ribbon too. Also, my final call to the entire design community was to add a final ancient element...ankh, wing of phoenix, or hieroglyphics on parchment paper...that will seal the who will win this contest!!
Thanks for your amazing attention to detail! Kind Regards, Tonya
I love that you lightened the kitchen! Although many of my friends loved the darker version, I really like the fact that you take the customer right to where all of the action is...the ancient kitchen. I also really like the kitchen sketches, they are not as warm as the colorful kitchens but I think they still do the job of giving customers and excellent mental picture of where an ancient baking company comes from. I would like to see more colors in the line drawings. Maybe just a lit oven, or one central eye catcher.
If you have time for tiny modifications I would welcome seeing these versions as well. Thanks for the updates and new logo designs. Your designs are ranked #3, #6 and #12.