Lloyd,
I'm going to make this one the winner. He's not completely content with the Feel It, but if you give us the logo with and without that included, I can easily add it in photoshop later. If you made this in Illustrator, I'd love to have that file as well.
I'm going to try to get him to look at some fonts online -- and see if he can narrow it down for me. I'm not even precisely sure what he wants to see for Feel It.
This is probably the closest one. Please change the lines on either side of the word Racing to BLUE, and angle Feel It upward at about a 30 degree angle.
Please make the top of the car, Visceral, and Racing silver. Feel it should be red.
He likes red and blue as an accent -- it can be very little, he just wants both colors there. And again, feel it will be red.
He likes the blue you have chosen.
For feel it -- he sent me a pic that I just uploaded. He's been saying "lipstick on glass" but I didn't realize he wanted something so feminine looking. He wants it to appear hand-written.
You have a logo on your page for Pronto. A big bold font like that is the right family for Visceral Racing -- not necessarily that exact font - but a strong, no-nonsense font.
This Visceral log is good. I think the design would be stronger if Racing were more like Visceral (in weight), and then if the Feel it were more prominent -- you'll see the comments I put on your other recent designs.
Your work is very strong. Thank you so much for continuing to modify and submit.
We're getting closer here with the Feel It. Maybe a little more prominent with that, and he's picturing it slanted upward -- maybe even crossing on top of the logo. With the idea being that it was a great logo on it's own (like you originally submitted) and then the Feel it - was written on it after the fact.
My partner would like to see Visceral and Racing in the same color and then have Feel It in red. Please send something like that when you have the chance. Thanks so much!
I like this design better than I like this font. The V, R, and A in Visceral in particular, and I think that the red behind them is GREAT, but it makes the "unusualness" of the font stand out. The A in racing doesn't bother me near as much as the R, A, and V i Visceral.
This is appealing at first glance, and I like the abstract suggestion of the Porsche, but again, I'd like to see a different Visceral. (thanks for your patience)
All of the logos that you sent are on the right track. When I looked at the thumbnails I liked them right away, however on the larger version, there's something about the two-tone texture of Visceral that isn't working for me. It almost looks like the letters are printed over a bump, or have a bend at the middle. Again, I like the shape, colors, and contrast, but the execution is ever so slightly thrown with that lettering effect.
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I'm going to make this one the winner. He's not completely content with the Feel It, but if you give us the logo with and without that included, I can easily add it in photoshop later. If you made this in Illustrator, I'd love to have that file as well.
I'm going to try to get him to look at some fonts online -- and see if he can narrow it down for me. I'm not even precisely sure what he wants to see for Feel It.
The design rocks! Thanks so much!!
Rhonda
Best Regards,
Lloyd
Thanks for your patience!
Thanks!
Thank you.
Best Regards,
Lloyd
Best Regards,
Lloyd
Thank you!
Best Regards,
Lloyd
THANK YOU!
Best Regards,
Lloyd
Best Regards,
Lloyd
Please make the top of the car, Visceral, and Racing silver. Feel it should be red.
He likes red and blue as an accent -- it can be very little, he just wants both colors there. And again, feel it will be red.
He likes the blue you have chosen.
For feel it -- he sent me a pic that I just uploaded. He's been saying "lipstick on glass" but I didn't realize he wanted something so feminine looking. He wants it to appear hand-written.
Thank you!!!
Thank you.
Best Regards,
Lloyd
Best Regards,
Lloyd
Best Regards,
Lloyd
Best Regards,
Lloyd
Best Regards,
Lloyd
For Feel It - he said the font would be like chalk on concrete or lipstick on a mirror.
He'll be able to give me more concrete feedback tomorrow, but I just wanted to let you know where we are.
Thanks!
Rhonda
Best Regards,
Lloyd
Your work is very strong. Thank you so much for continuing to modify and submit.
Rhonda
Having Feel it in white like this makes it pop more, but it probably needs to either be bigger or be bolder.
THANKS!
or hand painted on it
etc.
Thanks!
Best Regards,
Lloyd
Best Regards,
Lloyd
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