Thank you for your submission. That was very fast, and a good start. We do like the concept; however, we would like to see you play/develop it a little further.
We do like the line representing a green; however, I am not sure it should float in front of the V. #1
Also, we would like to try to portray Las Vegas in our logo. This is not a necessity for an acceptable logo; however, we would like to see some ideas. Not so much the overused Welcome to Las Vegas Sign (unless it is very well done), but maybe a hotel skyline or somthing that would say "This company does Las Vegas Golf" to a visitor.
Thank you again, and I look forward to seeing more of your creativity.
I do worry a little about the "i" in VIP getting lost and being considered V/P. Maybe experiment with putting the I in VIP, and moving the flag stick to either side of the VIP. Maybe add a silhouette person putting on the other side for balance.
There we go... I think that looks a little better, as now it is unmistakably VIP. #6
I am about to head out of the office for the weekend; however, I will revisit entries Monday and try to provide more feedback and ideas. I do like your progression, keep up the good work.
Clever, and I like it. #8 - Your time on it is appretiated.
I am not 100% sold and ready to go yet. If you have time, try to come up with another concept or two. I have not yet seen anything that portrays "Las Vegas" and Golf.
Not bad, but I think we are trying to overdo this design a bit. I like the VIP in number #8 as is. The poker chip inside the P, I think takes away from it a little.
Poker chips in general are hard to recognize as poker chips on thier own, because they look very similar to many things like wheels, or even the bottom of a golf cup.
You have worked very hard on this thank you. Keep it up.